Critique Riot's newest pic?

[Riot]

Mmhmm, just what the title says. This is the first time I've ever really let other people critique my pictures but hey, I may as well because you guys are awesome and don't seem the type to bite my head off if it's not PERFECT (which it isn't!). That, and I need help deciding which picture would be better for Tobey, because I can't decide. I have no muse for Jazz, so she gets no picture.



So, tell me what you think! My own issue with it is the text for his name, and his shadow. I like his tail, though? *pokes it*

Brownie points to whoever knows the song that the 'quote' is from.

Feel free to delete this if it's inappropriate, Misty.

[o.0Misty.:.Flame0.o]

nope, it's fine there, and, I LOVE IT!!! What did you do to the tail? All my tails suck...Anyway, I see your dilema with the text and shadow, the way the building is lit up, the shadow should go the other way, and maybe get a text that flows more, kind of like a cursive, but not quite...

[Riot]

Aw, thanks! <3 I think you're right about the text; I tried a few cursive ones and they didn't really suit. I think it's the colour, myself. I tried white and it just looked too bold and out-there.

XD His tail was cut, with a feather (is that what it's called?) of about 1, then smudged - I'm not sure what program you're using, but it should have smudge! - slightly at the ends, to make it flow more.

Anyway, I'm glad you like it. ;D I'm also proud of the fact that I managed to insert a completely different sky into the picture. Weee.

*gets off before the teacher in the library yells*